How to write a good essay: Paraphrasing the question

parts of this sentence. "...I think education has a much bigger impact." So, the first part of the sentence is in red and it's the "although" part, and the second part of the sentence is in purple, okay, meaning: "I believe that education has a much greater impact." And they are separated by a comma. Therefore, it gave two parts. You are saying what others think first, in this case: "although many", "many" means people, and we could also say: "many people." They argue that the economy is the most important factor in building a nation,” okay? So, this is what some people would say.

Now I want to say what I think. “I think education has a much bigger impact,” he added. So why is that a

good

idea? Well, one reason is because when you

write

privilege, when you show what another person's opinion of you is, you're showing that you've thought about the issue. I was looking at both sides. You are not just looking at your opinion. You look at both sides and then make a decision. This shows that you are thinking about the

question

and that you are really thinking about it. Represent both sides and you will really show critical thinking.

So this is a very

good

idea to do. Well, the three things we talked about today in terms of rephrasing the

question

are: changing words using synonyms, we've talked about changing syntax, and we've also talked about adding another perspective using collocations. Good? So, these are three things you can do to change the question and not just copy what's on the exam. Again, it's a great option if you're writing a high school

essay

, a college

essay

, TOEFL, IELTS, CELPIP, all of these things, you'll find this skill really useful. Now, you might be wondering, "Okay, this is cool, but I don't know any synonyms.

Or... you know, I don't know much about this." Well, what you can do is visit our website at www.engvid.com. You can find a lot of other resources there, including improving your vocabulary, we even have a video on how to commit and, you know, we also have videos on syntax. So there are a lot of videos that you can watch and a lot of resources. You can also visit our website where you will find a quiz and by taking it you can practice your

paraphrasing

skills so you can see, did you know, "Am I doing this right?

Is this...? You know this is the right way to do this? “And practice more. So, I hope you enjoyed this video. Until next time, take care.